Monday, August 18, 2014

Paper #1: Analyzing an Editorial

Hey everyone,

In case you lose the hard copy of your assignment sheet, find it in our class folder on google drive - see the "Homework" tab!

Also, here are more details on how I will grade the paper:

1. Woodstock Writing Rubric - This is the holistic rubric that I'll use in determining whether your work is A-level, B-level, C-level, D-level, or failing.
2. P1 Response Questions - These are questions I'll ask when reading and evaluating your paper. You're welcome to use these questions as a "checklist" of sorts to see whether you're meeting the paper's requirements.

I hope this helps! Please let me know if you need any additional information, or want to meet with me for one-on-one assistance. Good luck writing....... :)

TWO MORE RESOURCES:
1. Powerpoint on analysis v. summary...
2. Sample paper from a past student. This one was in the A-level. This doesn't mean it was perfect, but it's pretty well done.


Further reading on EMOTION / CREDIBILITY

Here are two more chapters from that Everything's an Argument book-- one on pathos and one on ethos. Feel free to read through these if you want to gain a deeper understanding of those appeals...

Saturday, August 16, 2014

meeting mr. capote

If you want to hear Capote saying more about writing in general - and ICB specifically - check out these interviews!

Monday, August 11, 2014

Further reading on LOGIC

As I mentioned, you can check out the chapter on LOGIC from Everything's An Argument here. It's about 20 pages long and goes into much greater detail than my "mini-lecture." This is optional reading, but helpful if you want a more nuanced understanding of the concepts.

Here's the powerpoint from class, as well...

Friday, August 8, 2014

open space notes

Nice work in class the last few days! I'm doing my best to decipher your notes about the various topics you covered in your open space discussions. This might not be 100% accurate, so please have patience...

SECTION AP11-1 (in Media Centre)
Why does Capote make Perry seem innocent?
-depressing childhood
-author's perspective
-trust-worthy Dick
-sympathy toward Perry?
-main focus on Perry
-find out the deeper meaning behind the murder
-our interpretation
-Perry had no hope; Dick had a family

Forgiveness/Sympathy/Understanding
-he wants us to be sympathetic toward Perry
-people who do wrong have a past - which may force them
-Dick: portrayed his lifestyle to be happier; Perry seems more sympathetic
-we understand but we don't sympathize
-blame goes hand-in-hand - Dick wouldn't plan if Perry didn't pull the trigger

Media's Influence on Crime
-exaggerate
-biased
-twist the plot
-personal preferences
-intervene
-uncertain information
-rely on sources
-take the law in their hands
-concentrate on incident rather than solutions
-don't realize the power in their hands
-target the influence

What does Capote say about the death penalty?
-says it's wrong
-says Dick is innocent and got the death penalty
-Perry killed four; Dick intended to rape
-mental health (INSANE)
-Dick used Perry
-Perry's background made him commit the crime
-Further examination needed to be done to see if Perry was sane or not
-Perry saved the girl from rape and then shot her
-Capote says Perry didn't know the difference between right and wrong
-Capote develops a relationship with them; visiting them in jail and sending them reading material

In-depth analysis of a criminal mind
-inconsistencies
-difficult background of murders (murderers?)
-why would Dick do this?
     -such a good life
     -was it because he was poor?
     -pushed Perry
     -just a witness?
     -blamed for murder?
     -EXPLOITER
     -BYSTANDER
-RAPE IS AS BAD AS MURDER
-Perry = unstable (wanted to be an artist)
-not knowing v. knowing (psychopath v. sociopath)
-trigger

What justifies murder?
-revenge (?) - no. puts in same position :(
-mental/psycho-responsibility
-blame on parents / BG / society?
-choice to kill / not to kill
-alcohol / drugs (personal will and decision)
-legal death penalty
-war / protest - gov's right to kill, personal intentions
-Israel v. Gaza (??)
     -excuse is that G attacked first -media's role in creating bias
     -self-protection justify killing? threat
      before any harm done. no.
      -religion's role

SECTION AP11-2 (in Senior School)
Motives of the killers
-Dick wanted to rape Nancy. Perry stopped him. Dick's idea. Perry blames his past life for the murder. Dick didn't kill anyone, so he took Perry along.
-Anger from the past, anger from the fact that they did not get the money. Dick took advantage of Perry.
1)money
2) sex/rape Nancy
3) killing
-Only reason Dick associated with Perry was because he thought Perry could kill anyone without any feeling. Perry was disturbed.
-Perry was uneducated.
-Clutters were the least likely to be killed.
-They felt relieved when they killed them.
-Psychotic spree
-Dick was frustrated. Tension between Perry as well.
-Dick overestimated himself.
-Dick shows no remorse at the trial.
-They wanted satisfaction. Get rich. Get happy. Go to Mexico. They wanted to improve their lives.
-Perry had a broken family (2 siblings died, 1 sister alive).
-Capote strayed from journalism.

Did the killers deserve their punishment?
-rape (Dick)
-psychological disorder
-Perry doesn't deserve; Dick deserves
-Perry claims (he knew he was wrong)
-Dick denies (sends letters to attorneys)
-Dick was the mastermind
-Perry was weak from inside; he took orders from Dick
-Every action of Perry -- Dick was behind it (the murder)
-Perry was also regretting as we can see when they were travelling, Perry was bringing up the topic over and again to Dick
-Dick surely deserved it
-Perry could have avoided death because of harsh conditions
-Law goes with action (they punish the person who commits the crime)

Do past events affect the future?
-schools (war, nightmares)
-personality
-Perry's uneducated
-Perry was the killer and he had a bad childhood
-Dick did not have any past experiences that he could kill a person but Perry had so he killed the whole Clutter family
-Perry got his diseases from his childhood and that was a reason he could kill a person
-It depends on a person if he could take - Dick wanted what he had-His motive was to steal money
-Going to jail is one of the reasons they end up murdering the Clutter family.
-We totally agree that the past affects the future.

Humanity (?)
-terrifyingly human
-could be anyone, turned out to be Dick and Perry
-humane side; still human
-actions define who you are
-rape then death = worse than killing?
-3/4 book is about past
-killing is only a small part
-some actions are heavier than others
-"make you feel as bad as I do" (Mathai)

Perspectives
-From the killers, the Clutter fam was perfect.
-Perry / Dick feel wronged.
-Clutters didn't do anything wrong.
-Dick influences Perry
-Perry had a horrid life, wasn't taught about wrong and right
-Perry was messed up, in a strong way.
Capote perspective:
-gave a lot of the book to the killers.
-shows how the killers were raised
-psychological reports, supported the killers
-but also showed the killing first, and in gruesome detail.
-and described how nice and supportive the Clutters were at home and in community
-killers were the more interesting people
-Capote paints the manipulation of Perry
-Perry a child, believes in buried treasure
-Until the end, didn't think of the killers as killers - just troubled people.
-Made the killers into the victims.
-Clutters didn't seem to have flaws, but no family can be perfect
Clutters (IIII) v. Killers (III)

Thursday, August 7, 2014

blog-rific!

As promised, peruse some of the following blogs for inspiration and an idea of what high-quality writing looks like. Yes, some of these students pushed the word limit at times. (And keep in mind that some used their blogs for more than just class, and they thus include other posts.) However, what most of them consistently excelled at was having something interesting to say and saying that well -- often in an interesting way. Enjoy!

http://fumigateyourmind.blogspot.in/
http://pranitgarg1997.blogspot.in/
http://hyunyoungandherlittlespace.blogspot.in/
http://wsshaurya.blogspot.in/
http://luluandenglish.wordpress.com/