Hi everyone,
We talked about paragraphs last week, and I asked you to do a little revision exercise. Some of you have sent them (thanks!). For the rest of you, please send it to me before you leave for Activity Week. I will grade these and put them in for the first assignment for Quarter 2. They will be graded on effort/completion.
Remember the four elements of a paragraph we discussed, and see if you can improve your weakest body paragraph:
1. Unity
2. Coherence
3. A topic sentence
4. Adequate development
I'll post the powerpoint to the google drive ASAP, so you can see it, but remember that you should have notes considering how little text is on the powerpoint.
Thanks! best, Ms. Mel
We talked about paragraphs last week, and I asked you to do a little revision exercise. Some of you have sent them (thanks!). For the rest of you, please send it to me before you leave for Activity Week. I will grade these and put them in for the first assignment for Quarter 2. They will be graded on effort/completion.
Remember the four elements of a paragraph we discussed, and see if you can improve your weakest body paragraph:
1. Unity
2. Coherence
3. A topic sentence
4. Adequate development
I'll post the powerpoint to the google drive ASAP, so you can see it, but remember that you should have notes considering how little text is on the powerpoint.
Thanks! best, Ms. Mel
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